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Review: Colour Me Rainbow     Review for Panchil       Title and Story Link:   Colour Me Rainbow (Ongoing, reviewed with 2 chapters)       Title: (9/10)   The title was eye-catching, interesting and original. One mark was because the title itself isn't gramatically correct. Either 'Colour My Rainbow' or 'Colour Me a Rainbow' is correct but I have to right to ask you to change it, I'm just giving suggestions here but Colour Me Rainbow is fine too :))            Poster: (8/10)   The poster was beautifully made but the only thing I could say that could be better is that the title. I felt that the title should stands out by making the font size bigger or placing them in the middle.           Description and Foreword: (19/20)   The description and foreword page was extremely clear cut, organize and was interesting! I have to say that I was deeply impressed with your Description! It sounded so poetic and classic yet staying mysterious, great job!           Storyline/Plot: (18/20)   The plot up to chapter 2 is still quite unclear. Is Kyuhyun suppose to love Hyukjae? Will Hyukjae return his feelings back to Kyuhyun? Was it suppose to focus on Kyuhyun's misarable life? However, as I've mentioned that it's only your short second chapter hence I couldn't critic much for the storyline/plot since it's just starting to develop.           Characters: (8/10)   So far, the characters are growing slowly and you're r
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babyblueunicorn
#1
Chapter 179: Saw it now, I am so sorry for all the misspelling and all... That specific story was written before I had any experience here.... LOL

Yes, I would love to help you with your Spanish homework.
Claro, me encantaría ayudate con tu tarea de español cuando la escuela empiece. ¿De dónde eres? ¿En qué grado estas? ¡Háblame por mensaje privado!
hermeh #2
read my fic? :)