Review: f a d e to black.     Review for SoaringCliche       Title and Story link:   f a d e to black. (Still ongoing, reviewed with only 1 chapter)           Title: (9/10)   The title is good, relate to the plot and was intersting. One point was deducted because it's not gramatically correct. (Fading into the darkness/ fade into the dark will be gramatically correct)           Poster: (9/10)   The poster was brilliant, it shows the story's theme well and the background of buildings at the bottom was great, it visualize the first chapter scenario. One points was deducted because the faces of the main characters wasn't clear or obvious enough.           Description and Foreword: (17/20)   The first The page look organize and neat! However, two points was taken away because of the excerpt. The excerpt should be about the part where Luhan had the encounter with the creature who save him or a part where both of them shared! That would make it more intense and interesting, thus making readers wanting to know more.    The other one mark was because it think you should have a breif introduction on the main characters : Luhan, Sehun and YiXing so there will be lesser confusion in the story.        Storyline/Plot: (19/20)   The plot was original, creative and mind-blowing. However, I have to say that in summary one chapter is way too long and there's a short and easy way to correct it. I realised that you took too many words and sentences to describe a scene that sometimes I forgot what's happening and I have to go back and read. For example, the part of the blackout and suddenly tons of words before describing what he's about to do and the part where he saw shadows and he thought was just imagination and suddenly after many sentences you're describing back to the scene. I love the way you descibe some scenes but some are just too distracting because it's too long.       Characters: (7/10)   Characterization of Luhan here is great but I was disappointed about Sehun and Lay. If he's one of the main characters, plac