Review: From Chen, to Tao     Review for grimchuckler       Title and Story link:   From Chen, to Tao (Completed one-shot)       Title:   The title is good as it is simple, related to the plot and it's interesting! The tile is the story's catch phase and it was memorable and easy to remember! :)            Poster:    The poster (that you place as the main image currently) is simple, looks organized and fit in the theme(angst/horror) well. Currently, there isn't any background picture and since your writing style is organized and neat, I think placing a plain picture/background would make the page looks better.           Description and Foreword:   I was amaze at how organize and neat the page was! The words and sentence choice you've made for your description and foreword are great too and they definitely made me feel like reading more. However, I felt as though the foreword is giving a little too much information since it's only a one-shot, I would have lessen the description/foreword about the story by a little bit to keep the curiosity.           Storyline/Plot:   Your storyline/plot is interesting, unique and it's absolutely creepy. I think it's important when people plan their story theme, the storyline has to deliver the theme well and you did it! It's wasn't only 'horror' but it was also creepy, while reading it I was in constant fear and anticipation. I definitely hold my breath during the of the story and the ending was unexpected in a good way. I would never thought of such an ending and it caught me off guard! However, at the end there was a part I didn't quite understand. When the police man and Sehun had confirm that Chen is writing to himself, then why did the last two sentence contradict? The last two sentence about Chen is still out there? I think you were trying to keep the readers stay fearful and scared so that's why you wrote the last two sentence but I could make it clearer to understand. For example: The restless dead soul of Chen is still searching for his Tao hyung...           Characters:   Characters was described well without having to directly say it, good! For example, you showed how insecure and lonely Chen is because he had to make 'Tao' up.       Since this is a short/one-shot story, I felt that there was too many supporting characters! 12 exo members? I would choose just either exo-m or exo-k or just a few supporting characters so it wouldn't confuse too many readers who don't know all 12 exo's members names.           Language(Grammar,Vocabulary etc):   There wasn't any grammar, punctuation and vocabular