Review: 花 [Floral Messages]     Review for ilysmfood       Title and Story link:   花 [Floral Messages] (Completed one-shot)       Title: (8/10)   The title is interesting but I felt it wasn't ideal because people will take a hard time to be able to find your story and people might misunderstand that it's a Chinese story. Another mark was deducted because 'messages' didn't fit in the story plot at all.            Poster: (7/10)   Two things that was missing for the poster is that the title wasn't inserted and there was no deception or accessories of the story in the poster. (eg, add flowers to the poster, add the title, add a quote/catch line.)           Description and Foreword: (15/20)   Firstly, I wouldn't recommend having the words is grey color because the background is white, black would have been a better color choice.     Secondly, the description of the story was too short and it should be more attention-grabbing. (To make it longer, write a short and brief information of the main characters.)   Thirdly, your description of your story should be highlighted and not the 'Credits' segment because the font used was too big - it took too much attention away from the description of the story.       Storyline/Plot: (15/20)   You have a great plot about the flower shop and about a stranger - Luhan and it was so wasted that you didn't expand the storyline a little bit more. It was because the story was too short, it made it feel lacking in many areas. Areas that was vague was the character's background and what are they're connection. The whole story was only focus on one scene where Luhan went to buy flower and there should be more in depth explanation. For example, flashback of when Lay first met Luhan. The story should be more happening by having the beginning, the middle and the ending. Instead, you should wrote about the middle part.       Characters: (5/10)   The main characters (Luhan and Lay) information, characteristics, background and feelings was insufficient. There wasn't any information of how they first meet, what are they're background, are they wel