Review for shawolistic       Title and Story Link:   Saturation (Completed story with 3 chapters)       Title: (9/10)   I don't really usually like one word title because most of the time it didn't represent the story well but yours seems to do the job. You've not only chosen a word that relates to the story, it also bring curiosity! Side note, I didn't think you've chosen the best word for the title because a story as good as yours, there other better words which could be better than saturation but it isn't a big deal.       Poster: (8/10)   The poster looks abstract and wonderful but I didn't quite understand it. It feels that it relates the story well but it's a risky move to not have the main character's face in it. It's more towards the special side and gives off a an artistic feel from it but the only thing I had in mind is that it might look better with the main characters face in in but since I'm not good with poster, it might also look hideous with the character's face.       Description and Foreword: (18/20)   Both description and foreword was well-written and it was interesting!       For the description, I would that the sentence 'It was that night and then several nights over when Yixing kept on searching for the iridescent spectrum of light.' more than 'Life is like a kaleidoscope...'' because it's easier to understand and felt more mysterious. The problem I have with the sentence is that it might be harder to understand because there's words such as  'discotheque' and 'kaleidoscope' that some people might not understand it instantly when the sentence about spectrum of light was direct, mysterious and could be easily understood.       As for the foreword, I like it as well! It shows a small peek of the story where's it's enough to make readers want to know more but at the same time, you didn't reveal too much of the plot.       Plot: (19/20)    I'm in love with the plot, it's one of those rare and unique storyline! You pull it off so well that I doubt there's anyone else who might write it better than you did because you did an excellent job with it! The plot was so unique and artistic that I could help but enjoyed