Review: Stop Messing With My Head!     Review for Araednia       Title and Story link:   Stop Messing With My Head!  (Still ongoing, reviewed with 22 chapters)           Title: (8/10)   The title is good but it didn't relate to the story so far. There wasn't anything about Kris or exo messing with her feelings or making her misunderstand. However, it does relate to the part about Hayoung messing with her head but I'm sure that it wasn't the main part or incident of the story.   I've also seen many stories with title similar to yours, 'Stop Messing with My Heart', 'Stop Messing with My Head', and 'Stop Messing with me' and 'Stop Messing with her' etc. Perhaps choose a title with relate to school, music, Kris, bully, friends with exo or being different as other girls in school.            Poster: (4/10)   The poster use was very lacking in some ways. The font used in the poster was rather unprofessional and it wasn't capitalize properly. (Stop Messing With My Head) The colors in the poster was too many making it looked too colourful and the background pictures was distracting and unrelated to the story. I would say to look for shop that will do the poster for you. Here are some shops that I know that might help, it's always good to request still not in very reader will there be a designer to graphic a poster for you :))    mochi & mochi // xExBxRxUx Graphic shop           Description and Foreword: (16/20)   The first two sentences in your foreword would be better if they're the same color and size to make it look neater.  Other than that, the next thing was too much words was use to describe each and every characters in the story. Keep them short but still have the necessary information, just try to summarize the sentences use for each character to about 4 sentences at most to keep them interesting. I was so excited to read your story when I read your introduction to characters part, with that many sentences and words for each and every character, I was slightly affected by it.            Storyline/Plot: (18/20)   The plot was good and it's very catchy. I read all of the chapters in a day because I was constantly intersted but still, the plot is still going slow. I was hoping the story's title meaning will be use but up till now everything is still vague. Firstly, the problem from day one is Minah getting bullied. To make the story insterting, add more major problems soon and have more c