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Review: Saturday Midnight     Review for GreenGardenPop       Title and Story Link:   Saturday Midnight (Completed one-shot)           Title: (8/10)   The title was good and it was memorable. It relates to the story well too but I felt that it was rather awkward. Perhaps 'A Saturday Night' or  'That Saturday Night'?           Poster: (9/10)   The poster was classic and not too busy looking. It was simple and there's pictures of the main characters and there's a title inside the poster. One mark was subtracted because the think it will be better if the title's font is the same instead of having it in different font, colour and texture.           Description and Foreword: (16/20)   It was nice to see that you've made a small summary/description/foreword for every one-shot! I love the summary and it's interesting. However, I felt that the story's theme is Romance + Horror since the ending is that Myungsoo thinks she's a ghost.            Storyline/Plot: (14/20)    The plot was good and well thought of but I was disappointed for the lack of facts provided at the end. It will be better if there's a real ending or revealing a fact about whether Jiyeon is a ghost or something else.           Language: (18/20)   Language wise, you're good in vocabulary and you're also very clear in the tenses used! The thing that you're lacking is using the correct word. Sometimes a better word would be better to be use and this could be done if you would to read the sentences over and over again. You might read a differ
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babyblueunicorn
#1
Chapter 179: Saw it now, I am so sorry for all the misspelling and all... That specific story was written before I had any experience here.... LOL

Yes, I would love to help you with your Spanish homework.
Claro, me encantaría ayudate con tu tarea de español cuando la escuela empiece. ¿De dónde eres? ¿En qué grado estas? ¡Háblame por mensaje privado!
hermeh #2
read my fic? :)