Review: Fix A Heart     Review for Ucant-stop-lovingme       Title and Story link:   Fix A Heart (Completed one-shot)       Title:   The title is definitely related to the storyline and it was emphasize well throughout the story.        Poster:    The poster suits the story well and looks good.           Description and Foreword:   You have too much spacing in between the foreword and description and it made the page looks slightly empty. You could have more description about the story and characters and add more description about the story and make it interesting for readers to read on. The quote in the foreword is perfect in terms of the content but it's slightly incorrect.   For example:    Cause you can bandage the damage   you never really can fix a heart   ('Cause you can bandage a wound but you can never fix a heart)   or   (Wounds heal but a heart can never be fix) etc...           Storyline/Plot:    I understand that the whole point of the short one-shot is about Jongin not being able to fix his heart. However, the story was lacking in dynamic and contrast.    Dynamic: There should a increasing problem or difficulties that Jongin face. A growing pain that Jongin face that maybe it was so bad that he was about to take away his own life or hallucinate everyday that it almost caused him to go mentally unstable. (After all it's an angst story)   Contrast: A big comparison contrast should be shown. For example: start the story with a romantic or blissful scene both shared and later write how Jongin felt when he came home to find that Sehun left. Emphasis on the differences that Jongin live everyday without Sehun and emphasis on how he felt.        Characters:   There wasn't any problems with the characters and it's a nice decision to place Sehun and Jongin together. Good job!            Language(Grammar,Vocabulary etc):   In summary, you have completely no problem with writi