Review for -natsukim       Title and Story Link:   Not a Tale (Ongoing, reviewed with 15 chapters)       Title: (9/10)   The title relates to the story well and have a mysterious feel to it. Great job!           Poster: (8/10)   The poster was good but I felt it could be better if there's two girls in between Myungsoo and make one of them shine lesser than the other to protray Songhye.            Description and Foreword: (18/20)   The description and foreword page was very organise and clean! I love the way you introduce the main characters in the middle with pictures to help readers visualize everything! One marks was deducted because I didn't quite understand or impressed by the small quote/poem you have and it's not gramatically correct.   When I miss you   I'll see through the window   Hoping you'll come back to me   Sweetly smilling at me (Smilling sweetly back at me(?))       You have an amazing plot here and I felt that it could be better. Why not add some facts about the story into it? For example, how both of them love the rain and yet Eunmi doesn't?        Another thing is that I felt that you revealed too much in the page! I was able to know the whole storyline vaguely.           Storyline/Plot: (14/20)   The storyline was good and special. However, it's still very 'expected'. Just from the description/foreword page, I could already feel that Songhye died and L will still see her around because he loves her too much and that Eunmi will try to help him but instead falls for L. There wasn't any addition complications or problems that occur in the story. All along it's just it. Adding a few misharps, realization of Myungsoo's feelings for both, family reaction and frustration of Myungsoo talking to himself etc could be added to make it more realistic and more intersting.       Characters: (8/10)   The characters you've choose are perfect for the story but still most of their characteristics are all vague. I realised that out of five chapters, there will be a occasion where rain, coffe and flashback are included. I felt that you could combine the flashback together into one instead of breaking them that much and confusing the readers. This way, you could add more emotions, feelings and charaterization of the main characters. For eg, Eunmi's family? Hoya? Woo Hyun? What made Eunmi fell for Myungsoo?       Until chapter 15, the character 'Songhye' was still vague. She's the main character in this story and we should know