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Review: Luhan is not Human     Review for cute_249       Title and Story link:   Luhan is not human (Still ongoing, reviewed with only 9 chapters)           Title: (9/10)   The title relates well to the storyline and plot. It was eye-catching and interesting. However the title could be better by translating to a better title with the same content. Eg: Luhan's soul or The Soul of Luhan etc           Poster: (-/10)   There wasn't any poster and hence it couldn't be graded. It's wise to get a nice poster for your story since it's a chaptered story or it might look uncompleted.           Description and Foreword: (16/20)   The page looks messy and most importantly too wordy - it discourage readers to read on. Give spacing to every start of the characters in the foreword section and the description section needs to be organized. The description is good! The foreword is the problematic one. Bold their names to make it more distinct and give one to two spacing after each character introduction.       Storyline/Plot: (18/20)   The plot was original in asianfanfic, although it's pretty similar to 'Ghost Whisperer'. It's a show where the girl who can see souls and she will try to help them until they are in peace and could cross to the other side. Still, an intersting, great, unique and original plot!           Characters: (6/10)   Othen than the basic statisic of the main characters, it's lacking in characterization. The characters (Miyeon, Luhan, Exo, Myungsoo) are all va
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babyblueunicorn
#1
Chapter 179: Saw it now, I am so sorry for all the misspelling and all... That specific story was written before I had any experience here.... LOL

Yes, I would love to help you with your Spanish homework.
Claro, me encantaría ayudate con tu tarea de español cuando la escuela empiece. ¿De dónde eres? ¿En qué grado estas? ¡Háblame por mensaje privado!
hermeh #2
read my fic? :)