Review for otakuromanticgirl       Title and Story Link:   Silent Yet Painful Rain (Ongoing, review with 2 chapters)       Title: (9/10)   The title was interesting, relate to the story well and was thought of well. It relates to the title right from chapter 1 and this make it a good title.           Poster: (-/10)   -There wasn't any poster and hence couldn't be graded-           Description and Foreword: (14/20)   The letters in this page was slightly too small and the picture was just too tiny. The quote from Luhan, Shin yeong  and Kris was rather impressive and it was interesting. (Please make the size of the words bigger) As for the characters introduction, get a largest picture of make the picture bigger but the pictures use is ideal.       Storyline/Plot: (16/20)    I was rather surprise at the pace of your story that it's going too fast. I think it will better if you would to have one or two chapters to show case how close the relationship that Kris and Shin Yeong shared because that way when you describe the accident scene, it will be more emotional and effective to readers. Secondly, I think Shin Yeong should grieve for Kris in one whole chapter to say how misrable she is, how hard she is living her life etc to give the strong impact feel to readers. Lasly, Luhan's appearance should be in more details and more emotions should be written. I love how you revolve the story with the sky, rain, cloud and sun. This should be your signature of the story, the poem/quotes you place in the description page was perfect! I was impressed with it and if you have it in the story, it will be great!        Language: (11/20)   You have some minor problems with forming a full sentence and writing the corr