Review: The Last Sword     Review for Tripping-Panda       Title and Story Link:   The Last Sword (Ongoing, reviewed with 8 chapters)       Title: (10/10)   The title was interesting and unique. It was eye-catching and relates well to the story!           Poster: (8/10)   The poster's font that was used for the title, quote and all was slightly blurry and it should be attention seeking but it isn't. The poster in general was slightly blurry and the pictures use wasn't in high quality/definition.           Description and Foreword: (17/20)   The description was slightly messy and unorganized because the too many words are in yellow color. Choose only one or two words in yellow to make it stand out and not that many. Overall, the page looks neat and interesting enough to make readers read on.           Storyline/Plot: (16/20)   I love the plot, it was realistic and yet mind-blowing. However, I didn't quite like the first chapter because it just suddenly start. One or two chapters before they attack will be ideal because this way readers will know how's the situation before they attack, how they live before, the relationship of Yixing and Luhan etc.            Characters: (8/10)   Since there's a lot of characters, it was very confusing for me. I didn't know where Yixing go and it seems as though he dissappeared from the story until chapter 6 where Luhan finally remember about Yixing. Yixing should always be in every few chapters so that readers will not forget about his extistence to the story. It will also be better if there's more infomation about all of the other characters. For example, Kris's character is vague here.       I love the way you're slowly progessing Luhan and Sehun together and it gave a special meaning