Review: Flight of Time     Review for Katakatica       Title and Story link:   Flight of Time (Reviewed with only 7 chapters)           Storyline/Plot:    Interesting plot and storyline with unique characters. I love how this story isn't too mushy or romantic because the characters are both man which made it unique to read and even though it's a drepressing story, I couldn't help but keep reading because I'm constantly curious.           Poster:    The poster used did feel suitable for the story but considering that it's such a great story, I felt that the poster could be better. You could try to make another poster that people could obvious see that Key have obvious blonde hair because you used it a lot as a description in the story. (For example - The blonde finally managed to whisper after a few moments.)           Description and Foreword:    Description of your story was good and the sneak preview of the description was suitable, however the foreword seems to too long. I'm sure you are able to summarize them to be a bit shorter but still keep the content the same for the content and the feelings from the foreword was great.           Characters:   Characters that you choose are wise and perfect. I would have immediate close/exit the story if it's about a man with a woman- typical so you choose the right characters. However, the character's background, their work/job, life, how they were before they meet, how did they meet wasn't told yet. You did explained briefly on how they meet for the first time but I think their first meeting should be described better as it should be special and I'm curious how they became lovers. If you were to slowly give short flashback along the story, it will be better and readers will feel like they know the characters better.       Since you used the description as 'The blonde boy', 'the younger', 'the taller, 'the elder' and more,