I think that you’re slowly working towards making the title go with the plot. You’re only two chapters into the story so you have plenty of time to do that. On the other hand, I feel that this title is quite commonly used for stories. It’s not exactly original and it doesn’t give off a vibe to say that your story is unique and different. For me personally, I wouldn’t be drawn to this title, simply because it’s common and nothing out of the norm, though you are credited for having a title that suits your plot.
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DESCRIPTION / FOREWORD
Your description is very simple, it’s written in first person as the main character’s thoughts. This allows your readers to have a feel about what your main character is going to be like, as well as what the story is going to be about. I feel that you’re not giving too much away but at the same time, you’re foreshadowing what’s going to happen in the story as you talked about having someone to help the main character, Hyuk. Nonetheless, sometimes, simplicity is the best and for your story, I think this is probably one the best fit options there are as a description/foreword.
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