Title: So, It's You
Author: blueleeyoorae
Characters: Luhan,OC,Baekhyun
Genre: Romance
Category: B*G
Status: On-going (9 Chap)
Description: Text.

Title (8.5/10):
Well as far as I know, the title "So It's You" hasn't been used before so yehet! Points for originality! XD, the title captivated my interest and I knew it would be one of them cute romances (which it is) so good job!

Description & Foreword (10/10):
Your description definitely gave me a taste on what the story was going to be about! I loved it! It was short, sweet and simple and I could tell it was going to be a great story! You emphasized the words "So It's You" in bold, making it a statement and it played well with the title. Omg your foreword was so cuteh! And could see that you have credited all of your artists and promoters! Good luck for your writing comp btw! ^^

Graphics (5/10): 
Honestly, I didn't really like the poster. It was a bit plain and the colour scheme and layout lacked something to me. Maybe that was the look you were going for, but I believe that every poster should have the power to captivate the reader's interest, and this poster, unfortunately didn't do the trick.

Character Development (10/10):
You're characters weren't portrayed in an overly cliched manner and they seemed realistic enough, like they were actual people. I think you did a wonderful job with your characters, especially with Kyungmi! I could feel a strong connection and empathy with her, like I really knew her. Full marks for this section! ^^

Appearance (10/10):
The font that was used was excellent! It was very easy to read and wasn't too freakishly large or tiny that would frustrate the hell out of the reader to not bother continue reading it. The story was also well structured and the chapter lengths were great, neither too long or short. In short, you're story structure's appearance met at the top satisfactory standard. Well done!

Originality & Plot (9.5/10):
I've read a couple of fics with the main character being a sibling or relative of a Kpop Idol before, but this one was different. It was more personal and it was trailing with originality! The way you wrote your story made the difference and I loved your ideas!

Flow (10/10):
Your flow was spot on it flowed beautifully from the beginning to the last chapter! I felt like I was actually in the story, and I could picture it all really clearly! ^^

Writing (9/10):
Your ideas were well conveyed in this story and it's also rather clear how you want the story to go on. All the chapters were smooth and exciting to read and it was flowing into me like it was some movie in my head. This story is definitely Kdrama or shoujo manga material!

Grammar & Spelling (6.5/10):
There were a few mistakes that weren't too terrible, but I suggest you fix them up Asap! ^^

Chapter 5:

“I just give* Sehun a company to buy bubble tea. He is still at the bubble tea store right across this park.” I looked at the direction Luhan had pointed *to. “And I’m not afraid, though. No one will recognize me since I am not that famous.” He chuckled.
*came
*to (add to)

It was the mixture of chocolate and rose*. I liked the smell.
*roses

His gaze fell at Sehun’s bubble tea. “Why didn’t you tell me that you’re going to buy bubble tea? I want *too!”
*wanted one too

Chapter 6:

“*Ups,” she said. I could hear laughter around me. “I slipped.”
*Oops

All this time I stayed strong, ignoring those harsh words and harsh treatment they were giving me. I tried to befriend with them. I never reported them to *teacher;
To *the teacher

Maybe I suffered from *claustrophobic.
*claustrophobia, honey :)

Chapter 7:

Luhan led me to a food *tend. The ahjumma almost closed the shop when she saw us. I ordered a plate of tteokpeokki while Luhan ordered bibimbap. The both of us ate in silence. I could feel Luhan was staring at me, well, more like my forehead.
*tent

Chapter 8:

What if Hyejin and her *gank found out about this?? What if we start up rumors? What if it affects Luhan and his group’s career? *And millions more bad thoughts crossed my mind that I didn’t notice Luhan had his face a few inches from mine.
*gang
*no need for the word "and"

Chapter 9:

Sehun chuckled as he patted my shoulder. “Chillax, Kyungmi. Hyung was just kidding. Geez, why are you so *panic?”
*panicky

Chapter 10:

“You sure have a loud voice for someone so *quite.”
*quiet

I felt a few light hits on my back and soon realized that Baekhyun was tapping my back to help me lessen my *chocking. “Are you okay? Why are you *chocking suddenly?”
*choking

General Enjoyment (10/10):
KAYYYYYYY!!!! I'm really, really, really, REALLY Enjoying your story so far! It's cute and funny with a slight twist of sadness in it but I seriously love it so far! You have done a brilliant job! Praise for all the LuMi moments! XD

Total score: 88.5/100
Reviewer: BestFriend4eva
Reviewed on: 09/09/2014
Comments and thoughts: Keep up the good work dear! Just be sure to go through your story and check for errors before publishing! Can't wait for your next update and I wish you all the best for ur writing comp! ^^


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