I love how you make the "blue moon" as the icon of the story. How everything happened under the blue moonlight. But i think that title fits fantasy fic more. I prefer something that screams "drama" more.

you gave the tease of what is coming without giving everything away. I love how you put a cut of the story. It brought up the readers curiosity.

the graphic fits the story and the genre very much. Well done!

i love how you potrayed the characters. How Sooyoung had been blinded by love she even acted like a . But she's actually not. How Amber is boyish but she change when it comes to Kris. And i like how you make Amber and Sooyoung is in a good friendship even though they were.. kinda rival? So yeah.. i give you full points!

there are some paragraph that has bigger font than others. Well just to be honest, i didn't get annoyed by that since i don't really care about fonts. But it might bothered some readers.

it's a little cliche. But you covered it up in some way so the readers won't get bored reading it. Well done!

the story flow smoothly and ended nicely. No paragraph that make me confused. You wrote it in details but not too long so the readers won't get dizzy reading it. Hehehe.

you convey your ideas in an understandable yet enjoyable way. It's simple, but you give the feeling.

i found some grammar mistakes. But not much. One of them is in KrisBer making love part. "She was breathed heavily". The correct sentence is, "She was breathing heavily" or "She breathed heavily."

to be honest, i'm not the type that like drama fic. However, i enjoyed this story very much. I really love the ending! Happy ending~~