Life Goes Wrong
KA4E
95
/100
Jaekkae
INFO
OG (6 Chap)
V (Taehyung), Jungyoon(oc)
romance, comedy,
(a little) sci-fi
B*G
SUMMARY
Ayo! What would you do if a strange, human looking alien arrives in your garden without a warning? Invite them in for tea of course! Wouldn't want them to blow up the whole planet, now would you? Now, meet V. The super-strange alien that always smiles weirdly and is always happy. Also the guy who blew a hole in the garden with his spaceship. What would happen if two humans finds him and accidentally invited him to stay for... I don't know... A year? Well, if you're curious, click "NEXT". And you will imediately join the crazy alien journey! Warning: The alien may affect your health with his crazy personality and aegyo skills.
REVIEWER
13/10/2014
TITLE
The title is creative and makes you wonder how life went wrong and why. It also isn't too original and made me interested.
10
DESCRIPTION / FOREWORD
You posed a nice question and leave readers with a cliff hanger after giving a good amount of information.
10
GRAPHICS
I loved the graphics! The poster included the main characters and was exciting and clear to read
10
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT
You had good character development. V became more comfortable with the others and the Bangtan gang seems to be nice, which is different from their first appearance.
8
APPEARANCE
The font was easy to read and the size wasn't too big nor too small
10
ORIGINALITY / PLOT
The storyline is very different from any other that I have seen before. I don't think I have ever seen V being an alien but he fits it well!
10
FLOW
The flow of your story is perfect! Not once was I bored! The story isn't too fast or slow so that is very good
10
WRITING
You used many interesting words and I could imagine every scene happening! Good job!
9
GRAMMAR/SPELLING
I know that you have a co-author but I don't know if English is your first language. There were only a few errors but that happens to everybody, right? The errors didn't make it hard to read or understand so it should be ok :)
9
GENERAL ENJOYMENT
I really enjoyed reviewing this story and almost forgot I was reviewing it because it is a fanfiction that I would normally want to read. I can't wait to continue reading it!
10
COMMENTS AND THOUGHTS + REMINDER
Comments and Thoughts:Great job! I hope that you update soon!!
Reminders:
+Comment if you saw this review.
+Don't forget to add proper credits with the link back to the shop!
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