A Little Thing Called Love
PG
90
/100
xaoieu
INFO
OG (? Chap)
Kim Jongin(Kai)+ OC
Romance,drama,
lightcomedy,angst & sliceoflife
B*G
SUMMARY
Back in the summer of 2002, Hana and Jongin laid their eyes for the first time and surprisingly they both had an affections toward each other at first sight. The two of them were fully aware about their mutual feelings for each other but none of them were brave enough to confess. "Ok then. I will confess to him when I reach my 12th birthday; the blossoming age,” Hana said. Unfortunately at the day of her birthday, the boy said he wanted to chase his dream, and the girl knew this will only bring their story into nothing but aheartache, and surprisingly it was true; he left her. Hana was really heartbroken; she didn't even have the chance to confess her feelings, and worse, to say goodbye. And now in the summer of the present time, fate decided to bring the two of them back together and they both successfully had fall for the trap that had been prepared by destiny; to fall for each other and this time harder.
PiperGrace08
30/09/2014
TITLE
for me the title is a bit boring. It doesn't really attract the readers.
7
DESCRIPTION / FOREWORD
luckily, you saved the title by the description. You gave the taste of what is the come without giving everything away. This is the point where you attract the readers. So you don't have to worry about the title.
8
GRAPHICS
i love the graphics! Especially the one in chapter two. This is my opinion, the graphic on the chapter one is too dark, it's more suitable with angst story. My favorite graphic is the one in chapter two. It's soft yet classic.It suits the story well and i can imagine seeing that poster at cinema. Hehehehe
10
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT
i love how Hana acts cold to her stepmother, but actually she cares. You potrayed all the characters in a realistic way. I give you full points ^^
10
APPEARANCE
so far i didn't see anything wrong. The fint isn't too large or too small and the story is well-structured so the readers can follow the storyline easily. Another full points for you, yeaaaaaayyy~
10
ORIGINALITY / PLOT
to be honest, it's a little bit cliche. BUT, you cover it up with such creative words so the readers won't get bored by reading it. Really, i enjoy your story alot.
9
FLOW
the story flow smoothly and goes slowly to the main plot. So you brought up readers curiosity and make it more interesting. Great job!
9
WRITING
like i said in "originality&plot". You convey the ideas in a creative yet enjoyable way. I can barely imagine as if it was a new drama.
10
GRAMMAR/SPELLING
so far i didn't see any mistakes. Maybe because the fact english isn't my first language as well. The thing is, there's no confusing sentences so the readers can enjoy your story more.
9
GENERAL ENJOYMENT
i love the part when Hana watching that boy (it's Kai, right?) And his sister playing and how she confused what kind of language they're speaking. I enjoyed your story very much. '-'b
8
COMMENTS AND THOUGHTS + REMINDER
Comments and Thoughts:thank you for requesting here! And i'm anticipating your story. I hope you can update soon. I'm so sorry if there are words that hurt you. I tried my best for not being rude. Thanks again, and keep up the good work! Hwaiting! ^^9
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