Your title "Beneath Her Beauty" threaded accurately with the storyline. I loved how the title was simple, yet deep and meaningful at the same time. I could tell you really thought it through before choosing it and, captured my interest to read your story.

I absolutely loved your foreword and description! You used simple words but yet made it sound complicated and gave a dark and sad aura to the storyline. I personally liked how you added a brief introduction of your characters and a little extract of a conversation of Kai and Areum. Also, the track list was a brilliant idea! It created the atmosphere of each chapter and they played well together.

Whoever is your graphic designer did an amazing job! The poster was beautiful and she really got in the right feelings and mood of the story! I liked how the colours contrasted and the little gradient effect at the bottom.

The characters are portrayed in a realistic way, and they were very real. They were definitely not the average typical characters we usually get in most stories on AFF and I was really impressed on how you developed each character since this story was heading towards a very mysterious tunnel of un-prediction. You put in a lot of effort for this section and you totally deserve every mark you got. Well done!

The font that has been used fits the story very well, it is very convenient to read the story. It's not too large or not too small that it could bother the readers to continue reading. The story is very well structured and therefor easy to follow. I also loved your layouts! They brought the whole story to life and played well with the text!

This story is definitely an original! It was so cleverly written and you have such great talent and purely big imagination to come up with a plot like this! Words cannot express of emphasise any further how I feel about this section.

Your flow was spot on it flowed beautifully from the beginning to the last chapter! It was like I was in a movie watching scene after scene. Full marks for this one!

Like I said in the originality and plot section, this story was definitely a clever idea. Your ideas are well conveyed in this story and it's also rather clear how you want the story to go on. It's very understandable and enjoyable to read your story. Your story played like a movie in my head, I could picture everything very well and your writing was truly beautiful.

OMG I COULD HUG YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOUUUUU! NO SPELLING OR GRAMMAR MISTAKES! ^^ DAEBAK!

I can honestly tell you that I thoroughly enjoyed reading and reviewing this story. You did an extravagant job with it and I can see your heart and soul poured into this. You have an amazing gift for writing and all I can do is encourage you to write more!