It is a creative name but it doesn't quite make sense to me. Though it is a unique name, I don't really understand why it was used

You had a good quote from the story and it easily made me wonder what happened to his wife. Since it is a one-shot, I don't think you really need anything more in the way of description and foreword. You did cover some information about the characters so that is very good.

You have very pretty graphics but I was just thinking that since it is a horror story, you might consider making it a little more eerie. But it is still good graphics :)

I don't think that character development was really necessary in this one-shot but I do think that Yoseob's feelings kind of got rained on after the accident :(

You did a great job at making sure that the font was easily readable and not crazy

I don't really read angst or horror because it makes me cry and feel sad :,( but those who write it well enough to make me cr deserve a pat on the back. You made my heart feel heavy for quite some time. Anyway, I think that this was very different from other stories and the plot was pretty easy to follow

The flow of the story was pretty good. I was able to follow it even though it did skip a few months at one point

You had some good descriptions that helped me to see each scene in my mind

I know you tried hard but there are some mistakes. They are easy to fix but if you fixed them, the story would be even more enjoyable. If English isn't your first language, all you would have to do is get a beta reader ^^ I am just going to give you some examples so that you know where you might want to check out "the groom lifted up the veil that covered her beauty face" just change "beauty" to beautiful. And also "They heard the sound of footsteps climbed up the stairs" Just change "climbed" to climbing. Those are just a few, I would be happy to revise it for you since I am a beta reader :)

I really did like the story, even though it made me sad. I have a question though, i wondered exactly what happened at the end. Did Hana come back as a ghost? Did Dongwoon have something to do with the voices? Anyway, I loved your story^^