It’s a good title. I think it makes people think what it is that’s incomplete. Definitely an attention grabber. But I still think that it’s not the best title out there.

Honestly, I think the description isn’t the best it could be. It needs more excitement. You’re just listing events that have happened.

I love the poster. I’m not going to lie, it looks very professional.

I feel like Donghae’s character is the ‘Mary Sue’ in the story. He’s too perfect. And I don’t understand how Yoona and Donghae have been together for 4 and a half years yet their relationship seems so underdeveloped.

Perfect. No need to change anything.

There are some aspects of the story which are original and others not so much. For example, I love how Yoona has a past with a girl rather than having a past with a guy and being with a girl in the present. But there are some aspects that seriously bugged me like how you say ‘I’m Im Yoona...’

I felt like it was a dragging a little and there wasn’t much excitement but this isn’t supposed to be an action story so you did well for a romance.

I really like your writing. The descriptions can be a little long but I still like it.

There are some tense changes. I’m not going to go through them because I’m not an editor but consider rereading some parts. If English isn’t your first language, your grammar is pretty good.

I actually enjoyed this story even though romance is not my favourite genre. It was good for an early morning read.