I really like the title. It expresses the story well. I think I've seen some other stories with the same title though...

The description was good. I thought it was a little longer than I would've liked. I'd rather read something short and snappy.

I don't care much about the graphics. In my opinion, books shouldn't be judged by the covers.

Hmm I like Charlie and I don't at the same time. She seems a little too arrogant for my liking. I'm happy that you didn't make her one of those weak, feeble girls who ache for the attention of men but I would've liked to see a more feminine side of her more often. I still understand why she is the way she is though. The other characters were fine apart from a few minor problems here and there.

I just think that you shouldn't write the dialogue all in bold. It's a little distracting.

In my opinion, there are a lot of fics out there where the OC has some issues like alcohol dependency and gets a job at the entertainment company. I think your story had more potential.

The flow was brilliant. There weren't any bits where I had to go and read again.

I love the way you write. It gives off a really confident vibe.

Perfect!

I enjoyed this story and I'm looking forward to read more from you.