I like the title name, it somewhat fit with the story at some points, other times not so much, but it was interesting and got you thinking. ^^

I loved your description to the book, it was well written, well planned out, I was interesting and got you think what that meant a lot.

I like how you really made it match the genre, horror, making Luhan's face broken, but at first I didn't get why it wasn't Xiumin, since he has the disorder, but then I realized that, Luhan was broken because of it, althougjt I think, Xiumin and Sehun should be on the cover also.

I really really loved how the characters were in this book, Xiuhan & Hunhan, it was really cool, because usually you see these pairings it's usually Luhan cheating in Xiumin or Sehun, but no, it was totally different.

Everything here was perfect, I love how you just left it the same, making it easy to read and see, except for the parts where you put, '~Luhan~' or Sehun or Xiumin, I was really confused, until I realized it was their POV (Point of View) so you might want to go an add in, 'POV'

The plot seemed really nice and even though I'm not a horror fan, it was the first time I likes one. Great job! I really hope you're making a sequel FYI.

I thought the flow was really really nice and good, the only thing was, I thinking was that, it was really hard as some points because I didn't know who was talking/thinking.

I really liked the way you wrote this story out, I would have never guessed that, that happened at all. You leaned every reader on until the very end. Good job!

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I thought this story was really interesting the way the characters acted was quite amazing. I like how you leaned every reader right on the end he of their seats and totally made the end what no one would've expected