B#5 | Minimalist | kamishi
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Title
Author
Characters
Category
Genre
Status
Minimalist
kamishi
Kim Jongin & Do Kyungsoo
depression, angst, romance
Ongoing (5 Chap.)
Description
about a romance that died and a boy who wants to die with it. but the other boy wants to resuscitate both.
Title
The title is unique and I think it fits the story pretty well.
Descr.&Forew.
Your description is very intriguing and I think it works very well for your story.
Graphics
Your poster is creative for your story and it fits well. I don't know if this was the intent but I think Kyungsoo look pale which really brings the feel that he is drug bound. It’s a good poster :)
Char. Dev.
There was definitely some development in the characters. Jongin became very suicidal after the break up and Kyungsoo became a drug addict.
Appearance
The font isn't too big and it isn't too small. Also, it isn't a crazy style either.
Orgin.&Plot
I've never read anything like it! It's very good and gives you both characters' perspective. I think it's a very creative story and the plot is very easy to follow since you tell us what tkme it is relative to the break up. Creative!
Flow
The flow of the story is nice. You make it nice and smooth and not jerky and difficult to understand.
Writing
Your writing is nice and you have good descriptive words. There was a part that I really loved because I could totally imagine it "The person looked at him, with eyes so smooth, they reminded him of melted chocolate. Fudge on a cold day, curled next to a heat source." This was a beautiful description! I could completely imagine it!
Gramm.&Spel.
There was hardly ever any errors and if there were any, they were simple typos. Maybe you could put less periods and more camas. I think that's all^^
Gen.Enjoym.
I love this story so far! I think some people can relate and it is a real world problem. Your description of many things made the enjoyment even better! Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more!
Title : 10/10
Description & Foreword: 9/10
Graphics: 9/10
Character Development: 10/10
Appearance : 10/10
Originality & Plot: 10/10
Flow: 9/10
Writing: 9/10
Grammar & Spelling: 9/10
General Enjoyment: 9/10
94 / 100
Reviewer: kpopaddict_4ever
date : 28 / 02 / 2015
CREDITS :
Credits to kpopaddict_4ever [KA4E] @ Steph's Bookclub Review Shop ©
COMMENTS / Thoughts & REMINDER
Comments & thoughts
I really like this story! I don't really have any last critiques but maybe more camas and less periods. Keep up the good work!^^
REMINDER
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