I think that the title fits the story perfectly! Even though it is a simple name, it is completely on topic. It lets me imagine a little bit about what and who are addicted.

Great job on the description! It tells me the main points of the story and who is addicted to what. The foreword gave me a little insight on what would be happening in the story. After reading the description and foreword I wanted to know more.

The graphics were simple and they fit the story. You even made sure to have Baekhyuns' eyes blue and Chanyeol's hair red. The quote on the poster was very good for the story and fit the feel perfectly.

The characters definitely changed throughout the one-shot. Baekhyun and Chanyeol both learned to be addicted to something less destructive and life threatening, each other.

The size wasn't too big nor was it too small. Also, the writing wasn't in a strange and distracting font. Thank you for making it easy to read^^

This was like nothing that I have ever seen before! The story didn't have the same love story as others, it was different and exciting!

t had a pretty good flow to it and didn't make me super bored like some might when they make you wait for the story to pick up.

There weren't a lot of huge vocabulary words in the story but there were some exciting ones and I was able to have visualizations from the way you used your describing words. So as long as you continue to put descriptions together well, you will allow readers to actually see the scene.

I don't know if English is your first language or not so I will be understanding^^ There were some places where you could have used another word or an 's' but those can be hard. The few mistakes didn't make it hard to read though so it is alright. I will suggest a beta reader who can correct any grammatical issues. I am a beta reader so feel free to ask me to correct anything for you :)

I generally really liked your story. It was different from others and was a little sad at times but that made it interestingly exciting. Again, there were some grammatical mistakes but those can be easily fixed. Good job with this one-shot!