The title fits the story perfectly. The meaning of the story is relevant to the story. I didn't see this title yet here on AFF. For me, there's a mystery around it. You may think, Oh no not yet another boring cliché story. Well, sorry to disappoint anyone, but that's where you are wrong. This story for me is nothing like cliché. For me personally, it drew me in, to continue reading your story.
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DESCRIPTION / FOREWORD
Your description is short but to the point. I like how you keep it short but still give us enough to want to read your story and trigger our curiousity. As far as your foreword goes, it's very clever to give us like a prologue there. In your foreword you let us meet Sehun already and his amazing ability. You also use the opportunity to explain a bit more about his background. This for me, was a good way to start your story, because it was easier to follow than. It does give the readers something to set the mood to start reading on.
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