B#6 | The Perks Of Being Lazy | constipatedpotato
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Title
Author
Characters
Category
Genre
Status
The Perks Of Being Lazy
constipatedpotato
Jackson and Bambam from GOT7
fluff
One-Shot/Drabble
Description
It's just a simple and short drabble about Jackson and Bambam being lazy and because of the two of them procrastinating, they get more time alone with each other and they realize their feelings for each other.
In which Bambam and Jackson are two lazy guys who hate bugs. Plus, an angered Jaebum because why the hell are there used socks in the living room--
Title
Though the story revolves around Jackson and Bambam lazing around, I don't think those were the right words to use.
Descr.&Forew.
Great job here! I love it when the author uses lines from the story~ I'm a er for that XD
Graphics
Cute poster for a cute story ^^
Char. Dev.
I can see Jackson and Bambam acting this way. Great job keeping them in character!
Appearance
The font is a nice size and there is excellent spacing. I see that you know where to indent when a character is talking o3o~
Orgin.&Plot
There was no cliche in this story and it seemed quite realistic! I can see GOT7 acting this way~ Though, it is not that original; I've seen these types of stories floating around the inter-webs~~
Flow
You have nice flow. It's not too fast and it's not too slow.
Writing
I like the way you use third person omniscient for this story. I don't see a lot of writing with that type of POV. Not to mention that I got the fluffy feelz after reading this xD
Gramm.&Spel.
When writing dialogue, you are supposed to put a comma before closing the quotes.
Ex: "I like food," she said.
Gen.Enjoym.
I enjoyed this story very much! But, I'm more of a Markson shipper ^^;;
Title : 8/10
Description & Foreword: 10/10
Graphics: 10/10
Character Development: 10/10
Appearance : 10/10
Originality & Plot: 9/10
Flow: 10/10
Writing: 10/10
Grammar & Spelling: 8/10
General Enjoyment: 10/10
95 / 100
Reviewer: SoraSuzagomori
date : 14 / 02 / 2016
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Comments & thoughts
Very cute story! A great quick read! Keep up the good work <3!
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