I don’t know, but I was a bit off by the title. I just don’t know why. Maybe it's because I've seen some fics with that kind of title. It's kinda corny for me, I think.

If the title was a bit off for me, the description and foreword was total daebak and pulled me to the story. The way she wrote the description was totally magic.

I’m the kind of person who does not care about the layout of the story, so it’s okay for me.

I love the characters, especially Heechul and Hyukjae. Heechul is this caring friend who did everything for his friend, even though it was wrong. I would love to have a friend like him. Hyukjae is one of the men the society needs more -- open-minded, understanding, caring and empathic.

Simple and the words are readable. It was nice he/she put a guide to know if the character is reminiscing or simply talking in his thoughts.

It’s my first reading a fic like this and I’m surprised it worked. I think I’ve watched a show a bit similar to this. I thought I knew what would happen but I was wrong. Totally cool.

The flow was good I read the whole fic in one shot. It was like riding on a yacht, nice and smooth.

Great English. I love her transitions. I'd say she has better English than me. She's like eloquent level.

I'm happy finding no errors in this fic. This is rare.

I super loved it. I totally fell in love with the story. The flow, the characters and everything are totally lovable. I wish for a sequel.