B#2 | Coffee Beans and One Night Stands | PictureMeBroken
✎ Steph's Bookclub Archive - For All The Completed Reviews -Title: Coffee Beans and One-Night Stands
Author: PictureMeBroken
Characters: Kris, Chanyeol
Genre: fluff, romance, comedy, drama, M-rated
Category:
Status: On-going (8 Chap)
Description: "Why would he give me his number?"
Because Chanyeol is one "hella gay" barista and Tao is one nosey boss that's determined to get him laid.
' you, Huang Zitao.'
Title (9/10):
The title is simple yet very eyecatching. But it is supposed to be Stand not Stands
Description & Foreword (10/10):
Short and simple. Filled with good amount of information. Honestly, I love how you cursed in the description hahaha. And I love how you warned the readers in the foreword. Good job, author!
Graphics (10/10):
Excellent graphic you have there! That's all I can say :)
Character Development (10/10):
The characters are all balanced throughout the story. I love how you described Chanyeol and Tao. Perfect :)
Appearance (9/10):
The story is easily read with big text. But it is a little bit different for readers that use phone to read so I hope you can recheck :)
Originality & Plot (10/10):
Honestly, I haven't read something like this before. Maybe once but the plot is quite different from your story. Creative originality and plot you have there. Great job, author!
Flow (10/10):
Excellent flow, author :) The story's flow is well balanced. Not too fast and not too slow.
Writing (10/10):
I have no problem with your writing skills. Words that you used are easily understandable and I suggest if you to use more 'flowery-feels' of words in your story. If you get what I mean :)
Grammar & Spelling (9/10):
No spelling mistakes. But sometimes you forgot the word 'in' and wrong usage of the '-ing'. Others are fine.
General Enjoyment (10/10):
I really enjoy your story. I love the neat flow of the story and the characters. I love the originality and the plot. 'Flowery-feels' of words and a little plot twist in the story later will be great. I love this story :)
Total score: 97/100
Reviewer: exoxexo
Reviewed on: 06/09/2014
Comments and thoughts: Perfect story you have there :) Just recheck some of your words and everything will be all great. Whispers I'm subscribing to your story. Good job and keep writing, author!
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