My Untold Story
XO
97
/100
BestFriend4eva
INFO
C (One-Shot)
Lay & Me
romance, drama, angst, one shot, reality, slice of life
B*G
SUMMARY
"Have you ever liked someone?" "No." Lie "Oh come on! I'm sure you have bef-" "No. I haven't." A denial and another lie. Every single time someone would open up their mouth to ask me that, I would answer with a monotone. Why? Because some things are best to be left untold. But bottling it up to yourself makes you carry a burden. Maybe it's time to let go. It's time to lift that burden. This is my untold story. A story that I'm now about to tell you. Are you ready?
exoxexo
24/09/2014
TITLE
Your title suits the story. Perfectly gives me hints of the story. Personally, it draws me in to read.
10
DESCRIPTION / FOREWORD
Wow your description :) See, a smiley for you. I'm so in love with your description. So suspense and attractive.
10
GRAPHICS
Neatly done but I wish the poster has more feels connected to the story :)
8
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT
Believable and great development of the characters throughout the story. Perfect :)
10
APPEARANCE
I have no problem with the appearance so full credits for you.
10
ORIGINALITY / PLOT
Credits for the originality and plot as it is your life's story. I love it :)
10
FLOW
Perfectly balanced. Not too fast and not too slow. Just nice :)
10
WRITING
I love the way you write this story. It feels like I'm in your shoes when I read the story. Good job, author!
10
GRAMMAR/SPELLING
Minor spelling mistakes like 'worlds' and 'of'. No problem with the grammar. Just recheck with these minor spelling mistakes and everything will be perfect :)
9
GENERAL ENJOYMENT
I truly enjoy this story, honestly. I love every part of it and using Yixing as the hero makes me love it even more. Great work, author!
10
COMMENTS AND THOUGHTS + REMINDER
Comments and Thoughts: Like I said before, I'm in love with this story. I'm waiting for the second part of it :) Good job and keep writing, author!
Reminders:
+Comment if you saw this review.
+Don't forget to add proper credits with the link back to the shop!
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