I must admit, I didn’t expect your introduction of Dalnim. I read the description you submitted and expected a rich/poor dynamic, so when I saw “She prefers jeans over skirts, heavy boots over heels,” I thought it was gearing up to be a typical bad girl/good boy au. The end of that sentence completely threw me off, although I suppose I should have anticipated that from the title. However, I thought the straying from my misconception was refreshing. Now, your foreword. I generally don’t like character lists/introductions because they tend to give away the whole story and tends to make the writer lazy in describing the characters’ backstory, so I’m anticipating a lot from you now. The descriptions don’t give too much away, which is good, but I would suggest giving only trivial information that’s unlikely to actually come up in the story, and more important information like “Life let her down a lot of times, making her the flawless assassin she is.” to be included in the actual story. Questions like “But what is haunting him that makes him roam the empty streets at night?” are intriguing, and can be left in as a hook. I’m anticipating the story. Let’s go!