It’s a particularly interesting title. It’s unique, original and ties in with the description. There’s nothing else I need to say.

Your description made me want to read the story. That’s what it should make the reader feel like every time. No matter if I’m reading this for a review, I feel like I want to read out of my own interest. Good job on that!

I’m not sure if you made the poster or not but let me tell you something. It is absolutely perfect. I don’t give 10’s out but this deserved more than that. It ties in with the title and the description so great job!

I am extremely in love with your character development skills. I wish I had them. :( I particularly enjoyed Chanyeol’s character but Kyungsoo and Jongin were portrayed so beautifully.

I had trouble adjusting to the way you set out chapters like the prologue, the middle and the end. I thought you could have just put the entire thing in either one or two chapters. The layout of the actual chapter was perfect though.

This is where I got a bit confused. It’s kind of original but there are a lot of angsty Kaisoo fics, where Jongin’s sick and they both fall in love. But. There’s something about this that is special and makes you want to read on.

It’s the perfect pace for an angst fic. It’s not too slow that things seem to go on forever and it’s not too fast either.

Absolutely beautiful. Like I said before, I am envious of your skills.

There were a couple of grammatical errors but that’s understandable. It was un-beta’d after all. But they were pretty minor so I’ll let you off on that.

I loved this fanfic and it’s fair for me to say that I’ll be reading the rest of your stories.