Title: Angels From Above
Author: fabulouseu
Characters: Suho, Sehun, Gina (OC)
Genre: Romance, Fantasy, 
Rating: /
Status: on-going (4 chapters)
Description: she's an angel. She came from above. But what is she doing on earth so suddenly? Especially in Oh Sehun's fairly poor apartment!.

Title (8/10):
it does fit the story.. but i think it's a little bit boring. It became less interesting to readers.

Description & Foreword (9/10):
it does giving the readers a taste of what is the come without giving anything away. The reason why i didn't give you full point is because it's kinda boring. Maybe if you put a little more in a unique way, it'll attract more readers ^^

Graphics (9/10): 
i love the graphic. It screams fluff-romance for me. But Sehun's pic dominanced the graphic. and i know the creator wants to fill the space on the graphic since it's just Sehun and Gina. Instead of Sehun for dominance. I prefer having Suho on that graphic too.

Character Development (10/10):
i love how you make Gina as an innocent and bubbly girl (well.. since she's an angel) while Suho, who's a human who has an angel heart. Is like Gina was seeing another angel.. ㅋㅋㅋ. And Sehun is the opposite, the cold and the i-don't-give-a-damn type of guy. The point is, i love how you potrayed the characters.

Appearance (7/10):
in some chapters there's one paragraph that has large font. But suddenly it became small on the next paragraph. To be honest, it didn't bother me (since i don't really care about fonts kekeke) but maybe it bothers some of the readers. For the structure.. it's structured clearly enough so i can follow the storyline easily.

Originality & Plot (8/10):
to be honest, the story is typical. I read and watch stuffs that similar with the story. An angel/devil/alien who broke rules then got kicked out from their races to earth. Then they met human who will help them get back to their kind. It also reminds me with a korean drama, "high school: love on" Yeah.. it is typical, so i think it would be great if you put some twists into the story. You know.. put some little surprises so the readers get more excited to read the story ^^

Flow (10/10):
the story flow smoothly and it's not confusing. I can barely imagine it in my mind as if it was a movie. You did a great job '-'b

Writing (10/10):
you write the story in an enjoyable and understandable way. I do enjoy your story ^^

Grammar & Spelling (9/10):
so far i didn't see anything wrong with the grammar or spelling here. Or maybe it's because i'm not good at grammars either hehe. But overall i didn't see any confusing sentence. so far i didn't see anything wrong with the grammar or spelling here. Or maybe it's because i'm not good at grammars either hehe. But overall i didn't see any confusing sentence.

General Enjoyment (7/10):
like i said before, i enjoyed your story very much. Even though it's typical but somehow it kept making me want to go to the next chap. My favorite part is when Gina's confused why everyone's wearing uniform, and how Gina react to Suho. She obviously likes him.. hehehe.. but the only thing that makes it less attractive is the title and the description.

Total score: 87/100
Reviewer: PiperGrace08
Reviewed on: 07/09/2014
Comments and thoughts: i'm so sorry for the long waiting!! I tried to find the right time but school is just very annoying -,-. And i'm sincerely apologize if there are some words that hurt you. I tried my best for not being rude. Anyway, i just subscribed your story. Keep up the good work! Fighting ^^9


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