Title: Dirty Beat
Author: RedFeather
Characters: Kai, Suho
Genre: , Romance,
Rating: /
Status: On-going (4 chap)
Description: Jongin to Junmyeon is a drug—with the aftermath destroying him inside, but at the same time, flying him higher and higher. Jongin to Junmyeon is addictive. Junmyeon to Jongin is every heartbeat with an unstable, rapid tempo—painfully lustful, but at the same time, keeping him alive. Junmyeon to Jongin is a dirty beat.

Title (7/10):
I haven’t seen the relevance of the title to the story at all, apart from the description. But it is a really unique title.

Description & Foreword (8/10):
I think it fits well with the story. Since it’s ongoing, you’ve done pretty well to keep the reader intrigued

Graphics (9/10): 
The poster’s perfect for the story and the genre. It gives the story a sense of drama and angst.

Character Development (9/10):
I like Suho’s character in particular, because he has mixed feelings about everything that’s going on. Jongin’s character slowly develops, and that’s where you get bonus points because he’s still a teen. He can’t control himself or his feelings.

Appearance (8/10):
The font could be a bit bigger because I was squinting. I was wearing my glasses too. But all in all, the structure is excellent

Originality & Plot (8/10):
I’ve read stories with a plot like this but the way you’ve written it, is impeccable. It’s absolutely flawless, your writing style. It would have been more original if Kai was the submissive one.

Flow (10/10):
Like I said before, your writing style is amazing. There is little that I have to say about it. The flow and the speed of the story is perfect. It’s slow enough to build the suspense and fast enough to move the story alon

Writing (10/10):
The flow and the speed of the story is perfect. It’s slow enough to build the suspense and fast enough to move the story alone

Grammar & Spelling (10/10):
I am a grammar nazi, and I can happily say that there were absolutely no grammatical errors in the story

General Enjoyment (10/10):
I absolutely loved it. I rarely read ongoing fics, because I like to read it all at once but this was a treat for me. I liked it when Junmyeon would have mixed feelings about Jongin. I think Jongin’s character is perfect. Reviewer or not, I’ve loved the story and I definitely will read the rest of it.

Total score: 89/100
Reviewer: kimchispaGHEItti
Reviewed on: 22/08/2014
Comments and thoughts: You’ve done an excellent job on it! It’s the first KaiHo fic that I’ve read, and I love it!


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