Beyond the Blank
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/662239/beyond-the-blank-romance-drabble-sehun-jongin-sekai

About: Sehun(Exo)+Jongin(Exo), slight romance

Ahri
Finished 3/27/14

Title: 5/5 Creative and relates to the story discreetly, allowing the readers to try to guess what the meaning is instead of making it obvious. Full marks.

Foreword: 10/10 Great foreword. It goes into depth about what the story is going to be about without really revealing the entire thing. Good job getting the prepping the readers for the inside of the fanfic.

Plot: 20/20 It's really original and well-written. I love how you show the two's heartbreaks before jumping to the main plot, and I really like how you left the ending as a mystery, giving readers a chance to sort of make up their own plots and try to guess if SeKai is going to happen or not.

Characters: 20/20 There are no problems at all. You actually described your characters perfectly, taking turns writing their story from their POV, allowing the readers to relate to them and like them. I also like how you showed that Kai had to think about whether he should help Sehun or not instead of just scooping him up and leaving without thinking through.

Grammar and Spelling: 20/20 None at all. It's flawless. It's like you looked over your work thoroughly after you finished.

Enjoyment: 5/5 There are absolutely no mistakes at all! It's flawless.

Structure: 4/5 Your spaces are uneven. At first there is only one space between the paragraphs, but then you get to the next section where there are two spaces. The parts where you're separating two scenes are fine, but after that there are too many spaces.

Overall: 84/85= 99 Your story as a whole is worth a one-hundred, but the spacing took one point off. Otherwise, great plot, characters, and proofreading skills! There are no grammar or spelling mistakes at all! Amazing job!