STORY INFORMATION

Title: Balloon

Author: simplymia

Main Characters: Park Chanyeol and Byun Baekhyun

Status: Chaptered, completed.

Genre: romance, slice of life.

Description/Summary: Baekhyun and Chanyeol are childhood best friends, having grown up together in a small town. They are known as the two troublemakers, and every year during the summer festival they play a big prank on everyone. The last summer before they move away and enter university however, they realize they have to do something to be remembered for forever. Together they plan the last trick, completely sure it'll be spectacular. However, during this Chanyeol is dropping hints to a rather oblivious Baekhyun, and the latter seems to suddenly become attentive to his surroundings.

Reviewed by: ParkKira

Date finished: 17 March 2015.

STORY REVIEW

Title.

Simple and in most cases, it could leave people in wonders what the story is mainly about, but, you could make it more tempting by maybe adding like ''Balloon Perfection'', something like that.

Appearance (Graphic/Poster).

The picture of the balloons is okay, but, you might want to add a lively, romantic poster of Chanyeol and Baekhyun. If you can't do it yourself, there's lots of graphic shops that can take in your request.. ;)

Foreword/Description.

The description is short and is a synopsis of the story, so, it does give a clue on what is going on in the story. You could add the characters in your description or foreword but still keep your original foreword since the readers will look at your description and foreword first before viewing the next chapter. So, you have to make your foreword a little more inviting like stating who the characters are, and their personalities.

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