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Title: Half of Me (Is You)
Author: kaisooumma
Reviewed by: PancakeJune
Title: 4/5
The title is really good; it's different. It also makes space for curiosity to flow in which is good because titles are meant to draw the reader in since they are the first things that they read. The title is something that would catch the reader's attention if they were scrolling through the 'Kaisoo' tag.
Also another thing, the title is capitalised incorrectly. Instead of 'Half of Me (is You)' it should be 'Half of Me (Is You)'.
Graphic/Poster: 3/5
The poster doesn't scream angst, but it does have elements of the theme. I think it seems more melancholic, but angst can be inferred from it- my perception of your poster could be different to others though.
Moving on from my perception, the poster is really beautiful. The title is quite clear, which is good since you'd want to be able to read the title. The quote is the only thing I'd need to comment on. It's quite hard to read, but it can still be read.
Foreword/Description: 10/15
The description is a bit short, but I know that it's probably because you want to give an effect. I do have a suggestion, for the layout if you'd like!
Original:
When something tore them apart, Jongin becomes helpless while Kyungsoo can do nothing. How will Jongin manage to free himself from his memories of Kyungsoo? How will he manage to move on? How about Kyungsoo? What can he do to return a vulnerable and broken Jongin back to the normal Jongin? And will other people think that Jongin is normal? Because after all, it's about death and everything after it.
Edit:
When something tore them apart, Jongin becomes helpless while Kyungsoo can do nothing.
How will Jongin manage to free himself from his memories of Kyungsoo? How will he manage to move on? How about Kyungsoo? What can he do to return a vulnerable and broken Jongin back to the normal Jongin? And will other people think that Jongin is normal?
Because after all, it's about death and everything after it.
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