STORY INFORMATION

Title: Runes of Despair

Author: myheartswishes

Main characters: Kris, Mark, Luhan, and OC.

Status: Chaptered, on-going.

Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Action.

Description/Summary: A girl is thrown into a dictator-ruled world but is suddenly faced with many new truths. 

Reviewed by: baoshi

Date finished: 1 March 2015.

STORY REVIEW

Title.

Your title is interesting indeed. I can't really put how I feel and anything else in this because unlike the other titles, this one in my opinion, doesn't suit the story as good as it's meant to be. You don't need to change it or anything but your title is tricky. I searched it up because I was curious on what 'Dunes' meant but honestly, I haven't gotten much.

Appearance (Graphic/Poster).

I was quite disappointed as of how you didn't have a background to back up your poster. I honestly think that a background is quite important for fanfics nowadays because the background is the main supporting role in creating an image while the reader is reading a chapter because even if you do put the poster within the chapter, they're just going to scroll past it while the background will be there until they click the 'next' button in which it will refresh. Other than that, your poster was well made, for some odd reason it reminded me of something from Camp Rock? All those decorative pieces in the background, spillages, etcetera, just really gives me that feel.

Your overall appearance is a B+ in my books. It's not too choppy (referring to your description and foreword) and your credits aren't right in my face either which is great! :) I think the only thing you need to get is a plain background which will match the poster but that really is up to you! 

Foreword/Description.