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TITLE: My Detective Girl

AUTHOR: foodgasm

REVIEWER: HealMeMyUnicorn

Title: 3 /5
1. First Impression: You used, 'MY DETECTIVE GIRL", then the story must be narrated or rather the point of view is upon the male lead. "MY" is used to show possession.
2. Aftermath: The story is in a second person point of view, so you must used, "THE DETECTIVE GIRL" instead of "MY DETECTIVE GIRL"

Graphic/Poster: 2 /5
It's very simple. And in your Foreword, the appearance of the female lead is IU, if that's so, you should put IU in the poster rather than the ulzzang girl. And because it's a "detective" story, you should've put more details that's related to being a "detective".

Foreword/Description: 13 /15
1. Description: The way you narrate it is good.
2. Foreword: Nice. Putting pictures/gifs of the characters and their role in the story is good. But the font color must be a little darker for the readers to read properly.

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