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TITLE: Listen to the Waves

AUTHOR: MiniCrafts

MAIN CHARACTERS: Jeon Jungkook & Kim Taehyung

GENRE: Romance and fluff

SYNOPSIS: When Taehyung gets caught spying on Jungkook at a resort, he never imagined it to lead into a summer romance like the ones in the movies.

STATUS: One-shot, completed

REVIEWED BY: KimHyojin

 

 

TITLE.

I like the way it relates to the summer and I love the feeling it brought! Like, honestly it reminds me of AOA's Good Luck with the cheerful feeling of the summer. As for the co-relation to the title, it relates quite significantly in my opinion, although you could do better, there was a scene where Jungkook and V were playing by the waves and I thought it was enough, also the way V stalks Jungkook using a binocular while he was playing by the waves, though it's not that interesting in my opinion, and I might skip over it while I was scrolling down, so perhaps that's the part you lacked in

 

 

 

APPEARANCE (GRAPHIC/POSTER).

I don't think I could expand much on this, though all I know is that it's simple, and it's a picture of V and Jungkook as a lifeguard, and it's cute. You could do better by requesting for posters, though. I think it would make things more interesting rather than just a stock photo, although it relates to the story which makes it good enough in my opinion.The second gifs and poems you placed in your chapter was really nice! I like it's aesthetic and I think the poem suits the story, so kudos.

 

 

 

FOREWORD/DESCRIPTION.

It's simple and it's cute! I like the way it's packed in one sentence, although perhaps you could expand on it a bit more, though this one is already good. The review credits is neat and I don't really have any complains, though it might seem a bit too small, it's not overwhelming in a way, so I liked it. Although perhaps you ended up givi

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