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STORY INFORMATION

 

Title: Too Innocent? I Don't Think So

Author: leejiwoon_18

Main characters: OC and EXO's Kai.

Status: Chaptered, completed.

Genre: Slight angst.

Description/Summary: Lara is the girl everyone thought she's innocent. But what if she isn't?

Reviewed by: LullyLace

Date finished: 23 February 2015.

 

 

STORY REVIEW

 

Title.

Posing a question, this title leaves the reader curious about an answer. It’s definitely a great way to get a potential reader interested enough to see what your story could be about.

 

 

Appearance (Graphic/Poster).

 The graphic/poster is incredibly eye-appealing. It’s very reminiscent of a movie poster. I really enjoy the dark, grungy look implying that we’re going to get a story that is far from the one about the typical romance. Of the two that are shown in the Forward/Description, I definitely prefer the second one. The dark colors with just a hint of orange really makes it look intense and mysterious.

 

 

Forward/Description.

 I do have to say I’m a little disappointed by the Forward/Description, mostly because I feel that it focuses too much on the: “everyone thought she was so innocent” thing and doesn’t really give us a semblance of an idea of what exactly this story is going to be about. I would have liked to see a more descriptive summary of the story, something that could feed my curiosity just enough to make me wanted to hit that Next Page button and start reading.

 

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