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TITLE: Falling For You

AUTHOR:  IdaDayahh

REVIEWER: thatkoreangirl

Title: 4 out of 5

It matches the concept of your fanfic, but not that much to lure me in to keep on reading the the fanfic.

Graphic and Poster: 3 out of 5

I really like the posters, but it didn’t really match with your theme which was more romantic. It looked more like an angst poster than a romantic poster. Maybe be specific when you are requesting for your poster.

Forward and Description: 14 out of 15

I really liked how you took out parts of the text to lure in the people to keep on reading your fanfic. The foreshadow makes everyone want to read more of it and its really good that you put copyright and that you don’t own the pictures. A lot of people use the pictures without the owner’s name or saying that it’s theirs.

Characterization: 7 out of 10

The OC and Chunji were described really well, but I think that L.joe wasn’t as descriptive.