STORY REVIEW

Title: Sick Pleasure [M]

Author: SadisticSinner

Reviewed by: PancakeJune

Title:  5/5

I think that the title matched the story well. It does attract people if they were to be scrolling through any of the tags you've used. It's also quite original, and I like the oxymoron!

Graphic/Poster: 4/5

The graphics are nice- the background and poster complement each other which is always good. I like how the characters are positioned as well as the font used for the title. The only thing I'd have to comment on is that I can't really see the quote properly; but that could just be my poor eyesight.

Foreword/Description: 14/15

I have no problems with your description or foreword at all. The layout was nice, the credits were neat and there weren't many grammatical mistakes.

Characterization: 9/10

Your characters were all portrayed well. I like how they all link with each other as well.

Jonghyun's character development was really interesting to see and his character fit in well with Key's. Speaking of Key, I never thought that he'd be like that. The things you revealed about him were really surprising to see and I really liked that.

All of your characters were really nice and I liked Taemin's character in particular. People with his condition are the worst when i