STORY INFORMATION

Title: Purple Rain

Author: Schandelierre

Main characters: Aliando Syarief and Kim Joonmyeon.

Status: Chaptered, on going.

Genre: Angst and romance

Description/Summary: Aliando, a scholarship awardee from Indonesia, met Joonmyeon and fell in love with him at the first sight. The friendship turned into love and they had happy memories together before one day Joonmyeon ended their relationship just like that. Aliando, determined to know what happened, followed Joonmyeon to his hometown only to find shocking fact behind their painful breakup. 

Reviewed by: LullyLace

Date finished: 26 February 2015.

STORY REVIEW

Title.

 It reminds me of a song. I definitely like the title. It has a very poetic feel to it, which is nice. It’s not too cheesy or too wordy.

Appearance.

There’s no poster or graphic for the fanfiction, so there’s nothing to comment on there. (Though I personally don’t find them very important on a fanfiction website)

Forward/Description.

Rather than give us a summary, you give us a sneak-peek of the first chapter. This could be good or bad, though I feel like the excerpt isn’t enough to tell us what exactly this story is going to be about. You could use this excerpt if you had a summary to go with it that would let your potentia