TITLE: What a Beautiful Mess This Is

AUTHOR: sleepingtodream24

GENRE: romance, comedy & slice of life.

MAIN CHARACTERS: Kim Jongin (EXO's Kai) & Do Kyungsoo (EXO's D.O).

SYNOPSIS: Do Kyungsoo hires a cleaning service for his mess of an apartment. He expects a middle-aged cleaning lady, he gets Kim Jongin instead. 

REVIEWED BY: SimplyHeartless

Title:

Despite the title being relatively long, I liked it. The usage of an oxymoron interest people as to what 'mess' the title is referring to and how can a mess be beautiful. I thought that it was intelligent.

Appearance (Graphic/Poster):

I don't know much about graphics so I can't say much. The poster is simple but I would appreciate it if the title of the fic is written in capital letters instead of lower case.

Foreword/ Description:

Your description is short and crisp yet it reveals a lot about the story. I would suggest that you use 'but' to connect the sentence in: ' He expects a middle-aged lady, he gets Kim Jongin instead.' instead of a comma.

As for the foreword, you actually wrote something resembling an author's note so I'm not going to comment on that matter.

Characterization:

You have just written the beginning to