Title: Rude Love

Author: chae_eum

Main Characters: Oh Sehun & Krystal Jung.

Genre: romance

Synopsis/Description: Because of a situation that has happened, Sehun is now chasing after Soojung. It's a misunderstanding, but it just leads to the two messing around. It's a simple plot with a lot push and pull.

Reviewed By: MisoCakes

 

 

 

 

Title:

I actually really like your title - for the way it sounds and also its simplicity; as well as the contrast of the words. I’d usually have a lot more to say regarding titles and stuff but I don’t know what else to say besides the fact that I really liked it AHAH.

 

 

Appearance (Graphic / Poster):

Okay - I really love your poster and background too. It’s /simple/ and it’s really /nice/. I like the whole polaroid concept here and the image used of Krystal is really nice. Your poster has that ethereal feel and I don’t really know how to fault it. The background was done so nicely, it looks so seamless and just blends really well. I’m really picky about aesthetic and all that stuff but I am really impressed. So good job so far  : )

 

 

Foreword / Description:

Description: Seriously man, I can’t fault anything so far which is surprising for myself because I am /really picky/. Your description is really simple and sweet - I love it. But the only thing that I would suggest on changing is swapping the speech with what’s underneath and maybe taking out the strike through. For example:

 

-Original:

“It’s okay to admit that you like to watch people get it on in a classroom.”

She’s trying to get rid of him. He’s trying to get in with her.

 

-Edited:

She’s trying to get rid of him. He’s trying to get in with her.

“It’s okay to admit that you like to watch people get it on in a classroom.”

 

But then again, this is just how I like to look/see things when I’m looking for a story to read.

Foreword: I will mention this multiple times throughout the review I guess, but hetero- is a genre that I stay far, far, far away from. I don’t know, there’s something about this genre that just irks me. I have no reason to explain why I don’t like it, but I just don’t. /However/, I really enjoyed the way that you wrote the forward LOl. I know this ties into characterisation, but I love how you wrote Sehun’s character omg. I just-