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TITLE: The Mysterious Boy of SME High School

AUTHOR: sunghyojin

REVIEWER: thatkoreangirl

Title : 2 / 5
I don’t really know why you call it the “Mysterious Boy of SME High School”. It made sense in the first few chapters, but then the story become a little mixed up when they became a couple and I couldn’t see the significance of it anymore from there.

Forward and Description: 7 /15
The forward forward didn’t really give me a vibe to make me curious. In a forward, you need a hook, so that people will get attracted to it and want to read more.

For example;

It's Hyosung's freshman year at SME High School. She's hoping that her stay there would be a nice stay for her. A transferee from China with a mysterious aura and considered a mysterious one named Xi Luhan went to SME High School for one reason: His parents wanted to experience life in Korea and he will change his aggressive attitude of his, back at China he always involved in fights. When Luhan and Hyosung were at the same section, things changed..

Instead, you can make it sound more interesting by adding more description into the forward.

“It is Hyosung’s new start in highschool and she hope that it would be a tough ride. A transfer student from China with a myst