STORY REVIEW

Title: That Winter Snowflake

Author: ChilyPepper

Reviewed by: Aphrodite123

Title:  3/5

 'That winter snowflake'.  Your title is good, a little bit cliche but generally speaking, it's not that attractive.  It's pretty common so although it fits your story, I think that a more unique title will attract more readers.

Graphic/Poster: 4/5

I like the poster that you used.  It is simple yet able to bring out the message of the story.  The background and all the graphics are nice as well.

Foreword/Description: 13/15

I love your description.  That quote is really cute~ 

The foreword is alright.  Well, it's really love at first sight and I can see that you love to add the korean drama elements into the story.  I think that it's both cute and fluffy, however, I think that it's a bit weird when Minho suddenly grabbed Min hee's hand.

Characterization: 6/10

Your characters are developed but not fully.  I don't really see a lot of changes in them.  Though Min hee may have grown up and become more understand