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TITLE: She's My First Love

AUTHOR: XOEXOSupFanFan

REVIEWER: AwezomeOne

Title (2/5)

I wasn’t completely drawn by your title. It didn’t immediately catch my eye which it should since titles get the reader’s attention. With that too, the title appealed to me at first as a sort of really cute and fluffy love story.

Graphic Poster (3/5)

The poster was good. It gave an angsty feel already. But the font color of the title, well, I didn’t easily get to read it since it was just gray. The ends almost blended in the background. Plus the quote was too small and was just floating by D.O. As a suggestion, it could’ve been at the top of the poster or below the title.

Foreword/Description (10/15)

Honestly, I wasn’t as drawn as I was to the fanfic itself. But at least, I got D.O’s feel about the main girl. He was in love with her but he can’t protect her. That was the description for short. And I see you’re inspired by “Moonlight”. You got the feel of the song but improve on describing on his emotions more.

Characterization (6/10)

I didn’t like Dasom’s personality at first. I’m seriou