Title: Disclosed

Author: srstaeny

Main Characters: Kim Taeyeon & Tiffany Hwang.

Genre: Romance, fluff.

Synopsis/Description: Tiffany was a stranger and Taeyeon hated strangers. A coincidental meeting at an intersection lead them to an intersection in their heart.

Reviewed By: KimHyojin

Title:

A one-word title, the ever so classic. I have a love hate relationship with one word title such as the ones you use; some authors use pretentious complicated words, only to put the definition of the exact word in the description, and while some works, some completely ruins the whole story, though thankfully, in your case, it worked. It wouldn’t work, if by any chance, you placed a definition as the story description, though thankfully, you didn’t, and I would like to give you kudos for that. In fact, the fact that the title actually has some correlation with how the story is planned out without revealing too much is already an amazing thing in itself. 
 

Appearance (Graphic/Poster): 

I like the artwork, honestly, there are balanced proportions of Taeyeon and Tiffany, and decorations that doesn’t overwhelm the whole proportion, especially with the sepia tone you seem to have on the whole overall appearance, combined with Taeyeon and Tiffany’s brown hair color, really hit my heart. It just seemed to blend with the whole palette placed in the artwork, and more kudos from that.
 

Foreword/Description: 

I wouldn’t have many comments apart from the fact that it piqued my interest a bit. Albeit some grammar mistakes here and there, though I wouldn’t exactly call it grammar mistake, rather, a poor sentence structure, though I am a perfectionist so you could just let this go rather than dwell on it. You can look on the Grammar and Spelling part for which part tickled my grammar police lady side, but moving on.

On the description, your choice of putting sneak peeks of the story really did it for me. Instead of putting pretentious definition of a pretentious word, you made me want to click next, as even the description, was interesting enough to made me continue. 

As for the foreword, you placed the description and the inspiration. I wouldn’t say much about this if it weren’t for the song listed in the foreword, which made me all the more excited to read the story itself. There’s not much to say other than the credits which are placed neatly below, and kudos for neatness, as it pleases my eyes.

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